GrapeNerd

Thanks for the review, but this was never meant to be published at all.

Hello!!! Thank you so much for reviewing! This was originally intended to be a draft for a character that I have in my D&D campaign. I had no idea how ...

Hi!! Sorry this was meant to be a draft and I had no intention of publishing it. It's just some brainstorm stuff for a character I'm playing in D&D haha. ...

Thanks! Yeah, I didn't really intend on making this as polished or whatever. I had it lying in my drafts for a really long time, and I've only decided to ...

I couldn't figure out how to edit the format for this one. Sorry for the messy lines.

I FEEL THE FEELS

Oh, well I guess you should keep the commas in then, seeing as they must be your signature thing! :)

Yes, you are correct! I am a Whovian! Well anyway, I hope you continue it soon, and good luck!

Ooh, nice poem! Very visual, the length helps, too! I don't really have any nitpicks, it seems to me that this poem was very well written, so kudos! There were ...

I look forward to it! Also, nice profile picture!

Hi, thank you so much for the review! Actually, this story was born through a spur-of-the-moment thing and then I lost power to continue. It's actually written in two points ...

Aw, that's a bummer, but I guess it kind of makes the ending even more realistic! I bid you good luck on your other projects!

oh my gods i was right! I totally agree, Leo is one of my favorites too, for some reason I ship him with Calypso..anyway, good job on your story and ...

Aw, thank you! I never thought of that! Actually, I started writing this as a conversation through a phone, but I changed some stuff. Thanks again!

Aw, thank you! Yeah, i agree, it does sound better without the comma, however it's supposed to be like that. You know, like how most kids talk nowadays.