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Re: Man Riddled with Arrows
Oh my god. I love Nightvale. I was attracted by your title, and how you categorized it as fanfiction (In all honesty, I try not to read too much fanfiction, ...
May 14, 2014 -
Re: Sitting Alone
Hello there! I'm here to write a review, but before I do, I'd like to say welcome to YWS! This was really well written! As I was reading I empathizing ...
May 14, 2014 -
Re: My Tish-er-TITLE
Hi, and welcome to YWS! I apologize in advance if my review is kind of crappy, I'm kind of scatter-brained as of the moment. On to the review! So, let's ...
May 14, 2014 -
Re: The Warning of the Sorting Hat
Hello, and welcome to YWS! Okay, so as I was reading I couldn't help but realize how much I miss reading the Harry Potter series. This poem (or is it ...
May 14, 2014 -
Re: Gracia
Ooh, I sense that you are a Percy Jackson fan, yes? Well, anyway, welcome to YWS! To be honest, I saw you in the "Who's online" window and I thought, ...
May 13, 2014 -
Re: The Pixie And The Giant (Part 1)
Hello, and welcome to YWS! First off, I think your concept is interesting, especially the way you started the story. I love how you explained how giants are kind of ...
May 13, 2014 -
Re: To My Sister
Hey therr, I don't really know much about sonnets, but this was really good. As for any 'errors,' I couldn't find any. Although I think it would help if you ...
May 13, 2014 -
Re: Apprehension
Okay, so this is a letter, yes? If it is, I think it isn't too pretentious, though the constant use of 'fancy words' make it just a little pretentious. I ...
May 13, 2014 -
Re: A Superior Kind of Hero
Wow, this is really interesting. Is this a novel or just a short story? I hope it's a novel; the ending is really great. For some reason, Judgement reminds me ...
May 13, 2014 -
Re: The Flip Side
Oooh. That was pretty cool. This whole poem is pretty cool. I don't really have any nitpicks, except maybe punctuation? Nah, your punctuation is great! I really like your concept ...
May 12, 2014 -
Re: Unanticipated
WOW! This is so good! This piece really made me say WOW at the ending. As in, out loud. You can bet I'll be reading more of your works! So ...
May 12, 2014 -
Re: Remember
WOWOWOWOWOWOW Wait, let me gather myself before I review. Wow. Okay, this is a really great piece! I love it. It's so sad and just, it's really great! I don't ...
May 10, 2014 -
Re: The shapes of time
Hi! This poem was really good, let me just put it out there before we start. Now, as I have already mentioned, this poem was really good, therefore I don't ...
May 10, 2014 -
Re: There's a narcissist in the mirror
wowowowow GrapeNerd here to review (but is it really a review?) your amazing work. To be honest I don't really find anything wrong with this. IT's just really really good, ...
May 2, 2014 -
Re: Just Jump
HOLY CRAP THIS IS BEAUTIFUL. (ahem ahem, let me gather myself) HOLY CRAP THIS IS BEAUTIFUL. Seriously, it pulled strings in my heart and almost made me cry. How dare ...
Apr 30, 2014
