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  • Short Story » Fantasy, Fanfiction Re: Man Riddled with Arrows

    Oh my god. I love Nightvale. I was attracted by your title, and how you categorized it as fanfiction (In all honesty, I try not to read too much fanfiction, ...

    May 14, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Sitting Alone

    Hello there! I'm here to write a review, but before I do, I'd like to say welcome to YWS! This was really well written! As I was reading I empathizing ...

    May 14, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: My Tish-er-TITLE

    Hi, and welcome to YWS! I apologize in advance if my review is kind of crappy, I'm kind of scatter-brained as of the moment. On to the review! So, let's ...

    May 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Fantasy Re: The Warning of the Sorting Hat

    Hello, and welcome to YWS! Okay, so as I was reading I couldn't help but realize how much I miss reading the Harry Potter series. This poem (or is it ...

    May 14, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Gracia

    Ooh, I sense that you are a Percy Jackson fan, yes? Well, anyway, welcome to YWS! To be honest, I saw you in the "Who's online" window and I thought, ...

    May 13, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Pixie And The Giant (Part 1)

    Hello, and welcome to YWS! First off, I think your concept is interesting, especially the way you started the story. I love how you explained how giants are kind of ...

    May 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, Lyrical Re: To My Sister

    Hey therr, I don't really know much about sonnets, but this was really good. As for any 'errors,' I couldn't find any. Although I think it would help if you ...

    May 13, 2014
  • Art » Dramatic, Other Re: Apprehension

    Okay, so this is a letter, yes? If it is, I think it isn't too pretentious, though the constant use of 'fancy words' make it just a little pretentious. I ...

    May 13, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: A Superior Kind of Hero

    Wow, this is really interesting. Is this a novel or just a short story? I hope it's a novel; the ending is really great. For some reason, Judgement reminds me ...

    May 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Flip Side

    Oooh. That was pretty cool. This whole poem is pretty cool. I don't really have any nitpicks, except maybe punctuation? Nah, your punctuation is great! I really like your concept ...

    May 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Unanticipated

    WOW! This is so good! This piece really made me say WOW at the ending. As in, out loud. You can bet I'll be reading more of your works! So ...

    May 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Remember

    WOWOWOWOWOWOW Wait, let me gather myself before I review. Wow. Okay, this is a really great piece! I love it. It's so sad and just, it's really great! I don't ...

    May 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: The shapes of time

    Hi! This poem was really good, let me just put it out there before we start. Now, as I have already mentioned, this poem was really good, therefore I don't ...

    May 10, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: There's a narcissist in the mirror

    wowowowow GrapeNerd here to review (but is it really a review?) your amazing work. To be honest I don't really find anything wrong with this. IT's just really really good, ...

    May 2, 2014
  • Other » Dramatic, General Re: Just Jump

    HOLY CRAP THIS IS BEAUTIFUL. (ahem ahem, let me gather myself) HOLY CRAP THIS IS BEAUTIFUL. Seriously, it pulled strings in my heart and almost made me cry. How dare ...

    Apr 30, 2014


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