GracieBee62

I thought this was a beautiful way to express your feelings. I think I understand your emotions and what you're going through; I'm going through something very similar. My favorite ...

"You'll never know how much time I've spent cryin' over you in the bathroom Thinkin', 'What should I do?' 'Cuz why should I tell you how I feel If you ...

Wow. I really, really enjoyed this poem. The rhymes were clever and fitting, and the words perfectly exemplified your feelings (at least, I think they did). This poem really touched ...

I liked your take on the definition of "destiny." It's a very broad word, and you brought up some good points to properly argue your side. For the most part, ...

Very sweet. I liked the feel of it. I have one grammar-related question... in the first verse, you say: "School days that seem to come and go But I’ll never ...

Imagine yourself here, As a raw piece of clay, Just sitting there on the table, No shape in any way. Many people will try to mold you, But resist, do ...

If you could hear what I was thinking, would you change your mind? Would your heart cease to resist, and the tension begin to fade? Can the walls you forced ...

Trust by Rascalover on Fri Apr 08, 2011 9:57 pm Trust. A funny Five letter word You blew mine away Like dust My world has Been held by many But ...

My thoughts are in Dutch, My vision seems very blurred; I swear, I'm not drunk. I stayed up until four-- I'm talking about a.m. The book was so good! And ...

Curiosity killed the cat, Satisfaction brought it back. There is a reason these words have been said, a reason you clicked on this poem. I laugh because you fell for ...

I loved the wording in this. Particular adjectives were incredibly strong. "I stagger backwards, Incredulousness Purging my body, Knifing my soul" This passage was especially captivating. "Purging" an