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Hi there I like this. I have a real soft spot for poetry that takes risks. This takes a pretty big one with the large amount of dialogue in it. ...

Hi there Like Skorpionne I think you have a great sense of rhyming and rheum. This poem has a strong backbeat that flows all the way through it, so that ...

Hi there I like this. I like the message and theme of this particular poem. The thing I think you could improve on is the repeat use of the phrase ...

Hi there I think this is the second poem of yours I've reviewed and I'm really enjoying your style of poetry. Like the last poem I reviewed it has a ...

Hi there I love this. Like I really love this. Firstly, your flow and rhythm is perfect. It literally rolls off the tongue. Secondly, as other reviews have pointed out, ...

Hi there. This i really fantastic. I think there have been a few poems and works posted on YWS about Japan but this is easily my favourite. Firstly, incredibly touching. ...

Hi there. This has potential but needs some work. Firstly, it is very, very short. I don't think you can convey enough of an impact in such short a piece. ...

Hi there. This is brilliant, and I really mean that. I love your use of brands and familiar items in the poem. "Sun Chips" is an example of that. You ...

Hi there Wow this is really lovely. When the disasters in Japan happened it was very hard to put them into words, let alone good, well-structured poetry. But you manage ...

Hi there. I'll start by saying that the language here is incredible. You paint great pictures with your words and that's a fantastic skill to have. My one problem is ...

Hello there. I really like this. I have a soft spot for lyrics and these were really good. I like these dark, and you could even say morbid lyrics. I ...

Hi there This is really good. I love the subject, and where you take it. There are a few things that you could work on, though. Firstly, it feels a ...

Hi there. This has potential but needs some work. I think that the somewhat simple structure does not work for this. I also don't like your use of rhyme. Although ...

Hi there. This is great, perfectly put together, well-structured and well formed. I love how you keep the reader going for a while. You don't know quite where it is ...

Part of me does not even want to review this, because I get that it is a very sensitive and close subject. I really do love it. You don't shy ...