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I'm so happy you like it! I'm like legitimately smiling so hard right now. As for Corey and Caldwell maybe so, maybe no. They are not more than friends... as ...

Thanks! This is my first novel type thing so I'm not as experienced in dialogue action, this advice is super helpful. I was noticing that too. I didn't really know ...

OMG I totally see what you mean! I'm gonna change that in the re-release. I think that'll communicate what I'm trying to say better. I'm super happy you enjoy their ...

Thank you so much for the kind words and review! I'll try to work on the info placement. I was trying to establish the context of their relationship and kinda ...

Yay!

Thanks this is super helpful I imagine the characters similarly so I'm glad they come across right!

How do you imagine Sandra and Annie like appearance or vibe wise? Why do you like them? Honestly I like them a lot as characters so I%u2019m happy you do ...

I hope you have a good time of the Earth rotation as well!

I%u2019m happy the vibe came across right! Claire ended up being way more freaky than I originally intended but I like where it ends up. What have been your fave ...

I%u2019m happy the vibe came across right! Claire ended up being way more freaky than I originally intended but I like where it ends up. What have been your fave ...

:) idk why it was glitching so bad in the comment cry

Yes I did. I didn't exactly know how to say exactly to say it but yeah. Tbh I still don't know how to explain it that's why I'm being a ...

Thank you so much! I%u2019ve been having a lot of fun with this and your feedback makes me very happy! Also about the first thing some hero%u2019s are oblivious but ...

Thanks I'll fix that I'm gonna release one through four with the editing once I've released them individually :)

Thank you so much spottedpebble! I'll try to fix the tense stuff, I hadn't noticed until you pointed it out lol. This reveiw meant so much and it had me ...