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Re: The Mask
That was very nice. As many people have said, I think most people can relate to trying to fit in so much that they lose the true purpose in life, ...
Aug 7, 2009 -
Re: A journey of a dreamer
Let me start with I like the ambition of the narrator. I can tell he is driven to this goal. This part was descriptive, but I didn't like it because ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: Love...or Torcher?
I like this poem, it was powerful. My favorite line was the last one, But is this love or a lighted torch? I truly believe that in society people can't ...
Jun 20, 2009 -
Re: Why love?
I like this, it happens to girls all the time. I hope your friend gets over him. As for the lyrics I think I found a few errors Every night ...
Jun 18, 2009 -
Re: Humourous Poems
Well hello there fellow new-be, (it's Ryley). I liked these poems. They were cute, I even chuckled a little. When did you write these? I liked how you displayed different ...
Jun 15, 2009 -
Re: No Match
I really liked this piece. How the tables Will turn It's so true how in life so quickly things can change and that was expressed in that line. Not only ...
Jun 13, 2009 -
Re: One big, not-so-happy family.
Wow, I see a lot of depth in this. I can tell the mix of feelings, a little disgust and hate in this poem. The topic you were writing about ...
Jun 13, 2009
