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Re: About poems
I know EXACTLY what you mean! I'm a writer of light, absurd little pieces myself, and all this blood-and-thunder doesn't appeal to me much. Amen and amen! Nicely done. *Gold ...
Fri Mar 27, 2009 4:33 pm -
Re: Ode to Jam
Thank you! I had wondered, before posting, whether or not it was 'legal' to repost a piece of writing, extended or not. I hope I have not broken some sort ...
Tue May 13, 2008 12:26 am -
Re: M&M's
I loved it! Well done! You nicely captured the fun and sugary sweetness of M&Ms! Just lovely. Keep it up!
Thu May 01, 2008 8:20 pm -
Re: April is Script Frenzy Month!!
Thank you. I think I'm beginning to get the hang of it. How did you know my main character's name is Betsy? :shock:
Thu Apr 10, 2008 1:24 pm -
Re: April is Script Frenzy Month!!
Galatea: Do you have an account on the screnzy website? What's your username? I've signed on, and could use some buddies! Goldie
Sat Mar 22, 2008 6:12 am -
Re: Fantasy Reporter
More! (Please?) Goldie
Fri Feb 01, 2008 4:29 am -
Re: Makeup is a mask
I thought it was interesting. You got to the point, and added a little twist there at the end that I didn't expect. And yes, I've never trusted that little ...
Tue Sep 04, 2007 11:46 pm -
Re: I am the Tornado
Ah! You've captured the emotions and thoughts of a tornado! Bravo! I would have thought they'd be a bit more dizzy. I like your choices of words. Very good!
Sun Sep 02, 2007 2:51 am -
Re: Edit: The Poem
Your descriptions of the blood and wounds made me shiver! Your word pictures were uncanny! Brrrr! The switching-off of the rhyme scheme at the end is interesting. It packs a ...
Thu May 24, 2007 3:54 pm -
Re: Fantasy Reporter
Oh wow. I nearly fell out of my chair laughing. This is so great! Can't wait to see what happens next! :lol: KEEP GOING!! Goldie
Wed May 23, 2007 6:44 pm -
Re: "Cat"
Wow! Your mental pictures are amazing! Your descriptions of their attitude and appearance are really good. The poem wasn't too long. You cut it off at just the right time. ...
Fri May 18, 2007 2:03 pm -
Re: painting the roses red
I like the content. One or two lines were just a teense awkward, it's true, but if you do it right putting it to music, I'm sure it will work ...
Fri May 18, 2007 1:58 pm -
Re: Uglies
I'm in the middle of reading it now. DON'T TELL ME HOW IT ENDS!!! :D Goldie
Fri May 04, 2007 2:46 am -
Re: The Flower Not The Knife
Very good! It really makes you think. It addresses what lots of teens feel and struggle with. I loved it. Good job! Keep it up! Goldie
Mon Apr 23, 2007 2:21 am -
Re: Psychology is Biology is Chemistry is Mathematics
Very funny! I liked it extremely, though several words didn't register... ah well! It doesn't matter to me, I still like it! Random, but wonderful! More! Goldie
Thu Apr 19, 2007 9:36 pm