GoldenQuill

Hay Shauna! Zly Quill here to review! You haven't felt freedom til ' you've danced in the rain, You haven't been taught til ' your bridges have burned, You haven't ...

Hallo, this is Zly or Quill, here to review! By the way, welcome to YWS. :} I made my way up the the platform in front of the large, foreboding ...

Your writing left me breathless. Hi, I'm Zly/Quill, here to review. Only a few grammatical errors here and there: No , it’s not just a dream. Our baby died. The ...

Hi Traveler! It's Quil--woah.. uh, it's Zly here, just got my name changed, still getting used to it myself. Let's dive in then, shall we? I liked this. It was ...

Must say that my first reaction while reading this: AWWWW. Hallo, Quill here, reviewing! Let's get started! You and I, we walked awhile across the common ground U p to ...

Hallo there! Quill here, as per your request. :} I know you said you wanted it more story-based, but I'm just going to go through a bit of everything, okay? ...

Hallo there, I'm Aushy, here to critique! So this was quite good, I really enjoyed it. I think this was supposed to be from Cecil's point of view, and though ...

Hi there. :} My name is Aushy, it's very nice to meet you. This was fantastic, to say the least. At first I thought you were talking about a dream, ...

Hi there. You are my hero. No, really. I've been seeing so many religious poems circling YWS. Not just about Christianity, but about Atheistim and Agnosticism (which I kind of ...

Hay dear! Sorry it took so long for my review, I deeply apologize. Though I have only slight practice in the poetry world, there are a few things that can ...

Great job! Only a few complaints. :} She was Mister Madison's wife, he'd jus' buy her more. Mr. Washington? My frein' told me how she overheard the boss talkin' to ...

Hay! Great job! The only thing I'd work on is your transition from Romeo to Juliet. If it wasn't meant to be a transition, then I'm sorry, but Romeo killed ...

Hallo buddy! Glad to see you writing again! This time there were only a few grammar mistakes, so let's address them. Why I'm being so pulled to it? Why am ...

Back to help with the new editing. And though I'm only a 15 year old boy, my name is known by all, and my wealth compares to no one else's. ...

Hallo, I'm here to comment on this story, because I adore Doctor Who and I'm bored. ;P As aforementioned about 578420570428502 times, this has very good description. I like it, ...