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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Eternity Curse - Chapter 1

    No problem!

    Sep 4, 2018
  • Short Story » Narrative, Other Re: The Nightlight

    No problem! ^_^ (Semicolons are so much fun to use, haha.)

    Jan 15, 2016
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: 20 Minutes

    Ah, that makes so much more sense. No problem!

    Dec 5, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Science Fiction Re: Tuxedo Boys [I]

    Remind me to review this. It's amazing

    Nov 14, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: A Gift with a Curse

    Haha, no problem! I just reread the chapter and it really ensnared my interest--I love the dialogue, especially. And the revisions look wonderful~ Ping me if you post more!

    Nov 5, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Rise of the Fallen: Chapter 1.1 *Revised*

    No problem! It was an enjoyable read. ^_^

    Oct 3, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Tryal's Curse 1.3

    Sep 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Grimm 2.2

    Gah, this review made my day.

    Jun 9, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Grimm 2.2

    Thank you

    Jun 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Grimm 2.1

    This was an absolutely amazing review.

    Jun 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Grimm 2.1

    Thank you! This was amazing and insightful, as always.

    Jun 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Grimm 2.2

    Thank you so much! That was an amazing review. :D I'll definitely take your suggestions and work on making the beginning smoother. I agree, it's a bit clunky right now.

    May 31, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Grimm 2.1

    Thank you so much! I agree, that dialogue is a bit awkward. XD

    May 31, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Grimm 2.1

    Thanks! I agree with all your points; the father's death is a bit sudden, and I'll definitely try to flesh out the characters more. This helped loads! Happy Review Day ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I'm Nine

    I feel this so much.

    May 25, 2015


Only the suppressed word is dangerous.
— Ludwig Borne