GoldFlame

Flame here! I can only admire your creativity. I've heard of cotton-candy clouds, but never of an ice-cream sky or caramel lining the horizon. Kinda makes me reflect back on ...

Flame here! Great concept, beautiful writing. I loved how you portrayed loneliness as a bottomless well - it's an emotion hard to escape. I'd just suggest meddling with the formatting. ...

And his skin was a pale shade of gold, like Durriken’s had been. Durriken dies ?!?! Anywho, onto the review. You never fail to amaze. I love how you dodge ...

Back again! Like KnightTeen, I love how you're alternating between past and present. It keeps the reader on their toes. Lauren Oliver did the same thing in Pandemonium , but ...

Flame here, as promised! Fabulous job. You managed to sculpt a common theme into something unique. The first few stanzas, I was certain that the "enemy" was a cruel boyfriend. ...

Flame here, as promised! Not too late to welcome you to YWS :D? I find it difficult to critique this, as the emotion was so raw. The words also fit ...

Flame here! Sorry I couldn't get around to reviewing this earlier. My goal of the week is to finish and review every chapter. Your novel is just so addicting :D. ...

Flame here! I'm on a quest to review random works from the past :D. Oh, and congratulations on winning Review Day! This was an enjoyable read. You've really captured teen ...

Back again! This is my favorite. Oh, and don't worry about anything getting confusing--I'm suffering from sleep deprivation, and I have a complete understanding of what's going on :D. Your ...

Flame here, as promised! This was amazing. I honestly...have nothing to say. You have true talent in writing. As I said before, everything flows so naturally. I don't know why, ...

Flame here! Happy review day! Whenever I check out the "All Literary" section, your Vampiric chapters always eye me, so I decided to take a look at the first one. ...

Flame here, as promised! I enjoyed this, and your spirit is admirable, but as a member of Paint the Roses Red, I'm obligated to disagree with you. You be going ...

Flame here on this fine review day... I haven't read the previous chapters, so my review is based solely off this one. Frees up room to take a look at ...

Flame here on this fine review day... I haven't read previous chapters, so my review is based solely off this one. Overall, nice job. No spelling errors caught my eye, ...

Flame here to review, as promised! It seems unfair that you're natural in both poetry and narrative writing. :D So I'm trying to organize my reviews differently, or at least ...