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Dear HBGirl4ever. Starting every line of a poem with a capital letter is for amateurs and hacks. there's something called poetic license, that states any poet may do whatever the ...

this was... not bad. sounded alot like "The Matrix" though. you might want to check on that, see what you can do to create solid differentiation. other than that, you ...

hey, this was actually a good poem, couple small things, waltz is so not the dance i imagine when i think of fire. I think that last part needs work, ...

the story seems incomplete, as if there is something more to come before or after... and as of yet, I also do not see the connection of the poem with ...

huh... whoa... that was cool, so she's an imaginary friend... I don't think I've seen that before... a story from the point of an imaginary friend... niice, well, honestly, it ...

It seems to me that the MC is getting executed, but I do not know why... it is a good job of describing the anxiety, but it leaves the reader ...

honestly, I read this and just had to say something. this was, like most of your stuff, brilliant. and oh so true, yet I notice, even though everyone syas how ...

hey a good poem, I think, and yeah, it reminded me about the time I doanted blood, except the fact that for some odd reason, I was looking at the ...

ahha, but you do capitalize the names of places, Gaul, Italy, and people, as well, Hannibal. I assume this kind of history interests, me as well, yeah, I was voting ...

okay, i know everyone else already said it, but it was HILARIOUS! sorry about the caps. i seriosuly laughed for 6 minutes and 18 seconds flat when I read this, ...

this was a very powerful poem, actually, It almost made me cry... no joke, its true you know, whether you are alluding to larger issues in life or not, but ...

Evi, this was quite brilliant, a bit random, and I am not sure how you actually thought this up.. I do have the same sentiments about Google though, Google addicts ...

an amazing poem, pure genius, anyhow, this is one of the most unique things I have ever read, and yes, it is all of thsoe thing adna, and from what ...

this was quite a peice of work, honestly. I have not read somehting this... I dont know, since, the Odyssey, or Beowulf, I dont know, I really don't this was ...

ahh, another outlaw, greetings, can you hear her whisper? from your very birth? Mother Culture tells you what is right, what is true, but it's all a lie. Mother Culture ...