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Thank you! :D I'm really glad I got my message out!

I like the way this seems to linger. Hauntingly beautiful. The best kind. I love it. Keep Writing! -Greena

The first part was not part of the story, just a description. NOT a zombie Apocalypse thing and the setting is in a time where- NOT giving spoilers. Will be ...

Can I get some reviews? I'd like to know how I can improve.

The parenthesis weren't meant as echoes, they were meant as thoughts.

I do have longer chapters later on. It starts out short, though, because I had limited time to write and I was writing one chapter in a day. This is ...

At last someone likes this simplistic style! I love books like this, where it's written as though the real character were writing. I will post more. Thank you. :) BTW, ...

Thanks for reading. I'll remember to fix my grammar.

Aye, the Nothingness... my worst fear, really, everything gone, being alone, no pain, no hope, no escape.... (Shudders) Oh and I fixed the sentence. :) Now there's a space.

Figured I should start explaining things as people seen not to like my rhyming style. Reason behind the off-rhymes: This poem was my dream. I know it sounds weird but ...

Wow.... just... wow. amazing poem. Perfect flow, great rhythm, absolutely fantastic choice of words.... I utterly adore this poem. You are a very, very good poet and writer. Amazing. Keep ...

Thank you! I just wanted to try a style that could emphasize my point better.

Thank you! That's what every poet wants to hear.

Thank you so much. This poem, by far, took the longest to write because of the pattern.

Wow, thank you. I don't write a lot a ballads, so I'm really glad this one turned out well.