Gnomish

Hi! I just started reading this, and so far I really like it! Your writing is actually very similar to Rick Riordan's, and the plot is definitely believable. A small ...

Hello again! Okay first off! A wedding, wow! That was fast! I was sure there was going to be some major love triangle between him and Prince Iyagi, because, you ...

Nice story so far! I liked the visuals in the second paragraph, but the first few (1-4) paragraphs weren't that interesting. I understand how difficult it is to describe while ...

Yay! The next chapter finally came out! It was great (of course) and I kept thinking the Prince would walk in on them. Luckily he didn't, but I got really ...

You finally posted another chapter! I don't really have anything to say about this, the plot and writing were both amazing. One small thing I noticed that isn't bad, just ...

Oh, wow! I'm not exactly sure what happened, which is good, because I'll have to read the next chapter. At first I thought this was a very "mundane" story, as ...

Nice! This is exactly what I look for in a prologue! It is somewhat difficult to decipher, but you can figure it out, and it leaves you wanting to read ...

This is so relatable! I always wish I could just delete a section of my life, or undo my last action. I loved your reference to a test after you ...

I really like the first chapter of this story! The beginning was a bit confusing, I felt like the tenses were all mixed up. it seemed like it should be ...

All right! I see it now, she didn't leave! Okay, perfect mentioning the pollution, of course that was what she would notice first! (I didn't even think of that before!) ...

Nice! I like the humour in this, (cause I'm a sucker for humour), and I find that your detail about the reactions of the humans would be very accurate... I ...

Okay, not much to say for this chapter. However, I felt that the build up for this job was a bit over exaggerated for what it actually entailed. Yes, it ...

Yay! I love flashbacks, especially when they're this clear and simple. Excellent chapter. I must say, I didn't expect Boja to be the boy being beat up. It makes sense ...

Awesome! Firstly, I would like to say that I did find the whole thing about the royalty very confusing. ALthough, I do tend to skim through things and I'm not ...

Okay! I'm not sure if this is like robin hood, or something completely different, I just heard the words "merry men" and immediately thought Robin hood! First of all, just ...