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Re: Flares & Fragments 1.1
Hello! I'm here for a review! First of all, I think this is really well written. There doesn't seem to be any grammar mistakes or anything like that, but you ...
Sep 29, 2019 -
Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 1.1
Hello! I'm here to review this prologue! I really like how it's written, and the humour in the plot. I'm not sure who Buck is yet, so I suppose I'd ...
Sep 25, 2019 -
Re: Five Passengers and the Minnow
Oh yes, yes, yes! I love Gilligan's Island! I read that in the description and immediately clicked on it! May I just start by saying that I'm so glad you ...
Sep 25, 2019 -
Re: what perseus couldn't see
Hey! May I just say, that this is the first of your works I have read, but looking at the related section I am excited to read more. Alright, so ...
Sep 4, 2019 -
Re: When I Was Anna - 14
Hello! I know I haven't been reviewing consistently, but just because I can't find anything to review! I really am liking the direction of this story! One thing I would ...
Sep 2, 2019 -
Re: Mirrored
Oh wow! Okay, glad I'm not reading this before I go to sleep! I really like the format of this story, it's creepy without being to unrealistic. Also, I appreciate ...
Sep 2, 2019 -
Re: Never Never Land- Chapter One
Hello! First of all, I really like the beginning of this chapter. It's engaging and pulled me in. I also really liked the writing throughout the chapter. It wasn't too ...
Sep 2, 2019 -
Re: Facing the Future
Hello! You requested for me to read this, so here I am! I'm assuming this takes place in some alternative England. A couple things I noticed, wouldn't her maids have ...
Aug 31, 2019 -
Re: Dear Young Writer
Hey! I liked the idea of this story a lot! I had a lot of fun trying to figure out the names of the the WriTerds Blockers, Lord Nuh-uhSayers and ...
Aug 25, 2019 -
Re: [DELETED]
Wow! This flower sounds like something out of a fantasy book! I can totally relate to going over the word-count, it's so difficult sometimes! About the essay, I like how ...
Aug 25, 2019 -
Re: The Hero's Brother (4.2)
Hi again! Sorry I haven't been reviewing consistently, but I have been reading the chapters! First of all, I really hope Gideon and Carter get together! I may be miss ...
Aug 13, 2019 -
Re: The Hero's Brother (2.1)
Hi again! I really liked the insight into Carter's character, as well as the "bandits." I'm getting a suspicion that Shiloh is the hero in Hero's Brother! Another tiny little ...
Aug 11, 2019 -
Re: The Hero's Brother (1.1)
Hi! I know this was published a long time ago, but it seems interesting and I like to read stories from the beginning. First of all, I really like your ...
Aug 10, 2019 -
Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 22
Yay! Another chapter! I like this chapter, although I'm a bit confused about one thing. Why was this mysterious book so important? And why can no one know about it. ...
Jul 25, 2019 -
Re: Percy Jackson fan fic (title in works) Part 4
Hello! Okay, I'm speeding through these chapters and I've just got a few more points to press. Number 1: "I wasn’t sure what I was going to do, so I ...
Jul 20, 2019
