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GirlWithATypewriter

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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Still

    Hey there! GirWithATypeWriter here for a review! I think this is quite a stimulating poem. Just from plainly reading it, I love your style of writing! The words you've used ...

    Jan 10, 2022
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Tree of Life

    hey there! It's GirlWithATypeWriter! Before I get started, just wanted to say that I love your name! First off, I love the way you've presented the poem. The poem as ...

    Jan 10, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Curiosity

    This is really beautifully written! I’m a curious person too and especially like to look into old superstitions and beliefs and see why them came about. In that context, I ...

    Nov 29, 2021
  • Poetry » Culture, Narrative Re: Gay

    Hey there! Honestly, this made me feel so warm in the heart. I don't know why but as I was reading it I just felt cozier, and it made me ...

    Jun 10, 2020
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: they tell me that writing is a form of art founded on rules

    Hey @Carina! So I came here thinking I'll leave a review but then I read this and went "Forget that!!" This is just a pure work of art! I have ...

    Jun 9, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: The Mask We All Wear

    Hi, it's GirlWithATypeWriter here with a review! First off, welcome to YWS! I hope you've found your way around(because this is a completely different, but a warm community). If you ...

    Jun 2, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Happy Birthday

    Hi LadyVendetta! It's GirlWithATypeWriter here for a review. I loved this poem. I related to it on so many levels, it was uncanny. I had a friend of 6 years ...

    May 29, 2020
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Silent Water

    Hey there, GirlWithATypeWriter here for a review! Right off the bat, I loved your use of imagery. I think that's one of the strongest assets of your poem. You have ...

    Apr 27, 2020
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Other Re: Are you coming to the tree where I told you to run (so we'd both be free)

    Hey there, xArrows! It's GirlWithATypeWriter here for a review. First off, I see you are a new member so welcome! It's great to have you here, and I hope you ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Would you Even be There?

    Hey there! It's GirlWithATypeWriter her for a review. Although whatchamacallit has done a pretty good job of summing it up, let's see what I can do. First off, kudos on ...

    Apr 15, 2020
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, Politics Re: Great Britain vs. America in the Revolutionary War (School Assignment) (Made with @KaPo21)

    Hi LZPianoGirl! It's GirlWithATypeWriter here for a review! Right off the bat, I loved the way you started the poem. The "I am Great Britain", "I am America" in bold ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Old Mr. Bell

    Hi, GirlwithATypeWriter here for a review! First off, I enjoyed this piece thoroughly. Such a heartwarming yet sad poem. You've managed to convey a very beautiful emotion in the most ...

    Jan 21, 2020
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Lovebirds

    Hey Victoria, GirlWithATypeWriter here for a review. First off, a really sweet, lovely poem. I loved the content and the description honestly made me sad and empathize with Simon's pain. ...

    Jan 18, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: goodbye.

    Hey! GirlWithATypleWriter here for a review. This review might seem a little informal so please excuse me. I'm honestly still shaking with emotions after reading this. I connect to this ...

    Jan 18, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: In Your Hands

    Hey, GirlWithATypeWriter here for a review. First off, I applaud your efforts. Writing rap is not everyone's cup of tea and you have managed it extremely well. Even as I ...

    Jan 17, 2020


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