GirlInTheMirror

That was amazing! You have a serious talent goin on. Like others before me said, you have enough material here to make a novel. Keep on going with it! As ...

I deffinately know the feeling! The imagery in this was really amazing. I felt like I was having the dream too. There are several things you may want to change, ...

Wow that was really amazing. I'll be honest, at first some of it flew straight over my head, but after reading it several times I really liked it. There are ...

This peice was really witty and interesting. There are just a couple of things that you may or may not want to change. The first one, and the one that ...

Hi! I'm a new writer here that wrote a fresh take on an old tale too. My peice was also highly metaphorical (If that's a phrase) and I started to ...

With this pen I can craft. I can construct a marvelous mountain that reaches to the sky with snow capping the peak. This sentence seems to be a bit too ...

Wow! I really like this poem. It flows so well, it makes me want to melt. I would have to agree with SimplyComplex though, the lines "I never felt lost ...

So this may not be a poem. I really don't know what the guidelines or requirements are for a poem, so I can't say. But what I will say is, ...

What a twist ending man! Deffinately not expecting that! My one suggestion would be to have Jack say something more menacing than the joke about the dog house. That was ...

awwww... The ending makes me melt like the softy that I am. I really like how Sam is kind of awkward and less adventurous and just kind of normal where ...

Hi. I really really really like this story, especially how no real action takes place but it is still interesting. The depth of description of Waverly's emotions is amazing. My ...

]I really liked this story a lot. It feels very fresh and new even though the topic of lying is so prevalent in literature, especially on this website. I'm gonna ...

I love this poem. Although it has no rhyming scheme, you manage to give the stanzas a sense of unity by ending each stanza with a question about yourself. My ...

I'll be honest, at first I didn't get this poem at all. I had to read this poem several times in order to be able to understand most of it. ...

I really like this poem. I recited it to my pencils but unfortunately I received no response... Apparently they think the question is rhetorical. Good thing there are always computers ...