GingerLizzy

I loved this. Your flow was absolutely perfect, in my opinion and you used some great imagery and emotion all the way through, so good on you! :3 Ginge

Have you heard that you got a nomination for the best Action/Adventure category? I thought it was great and so thought I should come and tell you. I think you ...

Hm, it's interesting how you found that. Obviously you have a lot of time on your hands. [Giggled] Ginge. :)

I've actually got Eragon to read... But I just haven't got around to opening it yet. It looks fabulous.

I want to go see the film now, and I've had my eye on the book for the past week. One more book won't take up too much space.

[Sigh] Sure, sure; delete away. Just thought it might help. :)

This has just been accepted for the Young Writers Journal. :)

Hmm, a take on Rhianna's song hm? It was okay but I didn't much like the idea of chaning the lyrics. Song writing should be there so you can find ...

What could I change indeed? I'm not very happy with this and I don't know why. I just get that feel that it could've been so much more better - ...

Edited mateys. ;) What a riveting conversation it did stir up, back then.

Hm.. I liked the rhythm better than I did before and I think the imrprovements that you've made have helped the pome dramatically, but I actually still don't find it ...

Hmm it's rather cliche, isn't it? A lot of emotion ran through it though, that of love - obviously. I liked the structure, it made the flow a lot easier ...

I didn't read this because I didn't like the strcture, it put me off completely. Space it out into paragraphs and when you do, I'll come back and edit. 'Kay?

This was actually quite good; I liked the whole concept, somehow, I found it quite phsycadelic. Not too sure about the flow though.

Sooo corny! I dont have that many comments about this actually, but in a way, I don't fel that it is very original. Hmmm....