GingerLizzy

Hmm.. Penny I like this in a way that I don't know why. I wouldn't say it was quirky, because it's not, but it just draws me to it without ...

Hmm, I have to say I quite liked this. I still like you other poems better though; I know you can do a lot better than this. I liked the ...

Hm, first of all, welcome to YWS 'n' all that., You have to remeber to adhere to the four review rule for each post; it makes it fair to those ...

Brad, I have to say, you may be a harsh critique-uhm.. er, but you are a gentle poet. Oh the irony. I liked this, it was pretty easy to read ...

Uhm, I have to say this is all way too deep for my liking. I am just a mere simpleton and when I read this, I knew that I needed ...

I very much liked this, I can say that honestly. The emotion you filled the piece with really gets through to the reader and I liked it so much that ...

Okay, I won't mention the whole Angle/Angel thing; I think that has been done enough. After reading your other poem, "Good Bye" and then moving onto this, I sort of ...

Hmm.. Welcome to YWS 'n' all that. Remeber to make four reviews for each post you make; or round about that. Now, I have to say I didn't like this ...

I didn't much like how you structured the poem, I must say. Why did you do that? The lines and indents make it seem broken and when it is read ...

I liked this; pretty good but I can't really comment any further. Not because I didn't like it or because I thought it could be better; but because I'm not ...

Whoa, this; I liked! I loved the rhythm and rhyming scheme of it all; it was really clever and the fact that it was only two small stanzas long didn't ...

Not bad, I don't think. But I had a problem with the whole idea; I have not a clue what you are trying to portray in this piece. Maybe it's ...

I haven't actually read this, but reading the whole idea of it and the synopsis, it sounds very familiar to Stephen King's new book; Lisey's Story. In that, her husband ...

I loved the little jump frog rhythm of it all; it moved at a fast pace but kept that poetic edge. It was a different idea as well, which intrigued ...

Okay, my first niggle into this poem is the structure. It made me want to stop reading if I'm honest, but I think you can ignore this because I believe ...