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Re: Writing.
You don't know how spot on this is! I know what you mean. I write constantly even though my parents might want me to do something. This is a great ...
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Re: The Hell I live in
This is beautiful. This is brilliantly written. It is VERY realistic and I applaud you for that. I think everyone has their personal hell and I believe the mind is ...
Apr 20, 2014 -
Re: Rubber Bands
Wow! This is fantastic. You described that perfectly. This was a great metaphor. I was thinking of someone going insane, but you might be thinking of something else. This was ...
Apr 20, 2014 -
Re: Life Counts
I like this poem. I could feel the emotion put into it. You put in a lot of percents, but you made it work. I also like how you summed ...
Apr 20, 2014 -
Re: I kissed a girl....I wasn't a fan.
This is fantastic! I'm cracking up. I have a gay friend and I thought this was hilarious. I love the way you broke up your poem. It looks so much ...
Apr 20, 2014 -
Re: The Differences Between the Seasons
Wow! This was fantastic! The repetition of words and your use of more difficult words was brilliant! You were very descriptive and made this poem have a certain feel. You ...
Apr 20, 2014 -
Re: Love a soldier
This was a poem that touched my heart. I don't have any one I know in the army, but still this brought a tear to my eye. You had a ...
Apr 20, 2014