GiggleGremlin

Hey! I think this poem is cute =) I actually like the way you put sometimes at the end of each stanza, its saying sometimes rain is like sometimes its ...

Hello! Your poem is really good! You use a lot of words that I don't know the meaning of hahaha, thats a good thing =) I'm not sure how I ...

Hey Laylie!! This is really pretty. It kindof made me sad but happy at the same time =) It gave you a lot of pictures in your head hahaha and ...

I think this poem is really pretty. It has a lot of imagry in it and emotion. It makes you happy when you read it =D I also think it ...

This poem is really prettyyy =) You put alot of emotion in it and repeating certain parts of it give it a good effect hahaha. It also had good rythm ...

Wow you use big words!!! hahaha =) I liked your poem =D It had a lot of emotion in it and although I didn't fully understand thats okay because it ...

Its a good first poem!!! =D I think I understand the story, this is a good thing that its not too straight forward, you make it more interesting =) It ...

Helloo!! Your story is written really well : ) It seems like a real person. I like how you had the thoughts in her head and showed the emotions that ...

Hey I'm really sorry for what happened. I hope your okay. I just wanted to say that this is a really sad and beautiful poem :) It has so much ...

This poem is really good because it makes you think. I gives me the feeling that youve been wondering these things :) You have really good ryhmes and I like ...

Yeah you posted something!! When I read this I was like woah! I wish I could write this good :) hahha I shall read your other one now! :D

Naww your start is really sad, it was really personal and I ike how you made it sound like a four year old at the start:) This is a really ...

Hahaha your poem is so good! I love the ending :) 'When life shits on you with bricks, Pick them up and build a wall.' Its so clever and funny. ...

I loved this story! I'm going to follow it!! Your amazing at writing, you should keep posting more :D I really liked how you made the two characters, and you ...

Yeah I liked your poem!!!! :) Its not a style I would usually read but I could really relate to it and I like your ending line "I'm still too ...