GhostlyImpressions

I can't look at this logically, because I actually have tears in the corners of my eyes. It's amazing. Genius. Brilliant. It was written so well...I love it. - GhostlyImpressions.

First up: this is a really great poem; I mean honestly, it is. There is one tiny thing that might work a little differently if it were changed. You blame ...

Thank you all so much, truly. This really is a great thing to hear about my second attempt at song lyrics. :D

I just have one thing to say: this is brilliant. It's beautiful, emotive and emotional. Definitely simple, but love can be simple, and simple can be magic. I love it. ...

Harry Potter.

Thanks for your review, I have now shortened it. Not that I'm too pleased that I needed to slaughter my own novel, but perhaps it was better to do so ...

I actually like this one, and not only because of the imagery it creates; but also because it's real. It's simplistic, but it's also beautiful. Warning others about a monster ...

This is beautiful; like, actually beautiful. I can almost feel the pain of it all. The repetition makes it all work too. It's lovely.