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Re: Weak Tears beneath The Blackest of Skies
Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! I haven't a way to thank you for your review! I was very pleased with that piece, but I wished to make sure and ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: Fruitless Attempts With a Japanese Pen
Pinko!!! I know we haven't talked in a VERY long time, and I do miss you a lot. Thank you, both of you. Strange thing was that when I started ...
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: Sorry to Mubarak, Due to My Lack of Manner
SubjectBlue, do you think it's legitimate for Israeli soldiers to shoot Egyptian ones without a just cause? Try to know the real story, please, before you become too aggressive or ...
Sep 17, 2011 -
Re: Sorry to Mubarak, Due to My Lack of Manner
Yes, that's exactly why I apologized. I don't like accusing someone of something, unless it's in their faces and they could speak back. I have no idea whether he'd apologize ...
Sep 16, 2011 -
Re: Sorry to Mubarak, Due to My Lack of Manner
Nobody knows for sure. First, they said he has cancer, then they said he doesn't. But I say he's old and it's normal if he was ill. But during the ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Autumn Leaves are Falling Down
Hahaha! I just loved it! I was singing it while I read it! It was beautiful and it made me laugh. Now I'm happy and you just made my day! ...
May 20, 2011 -
Re: The Legend of Dana (Chapter 2)
Is this a paragraph from chapter Two? Or it's the whole chapter? It's very very very short. A chapter is normally 10 pages or more. Try to expand the details, ...
May 20, 2011 -
Re: Her Unlucky Cup of Coffee
How could I ever thank you, each and every one of you? Thank you very much for those reviews. Come to think of it, I do think I need to ...
May 17, 2011 -
Re: Madness During my Solitude
Oh, thank you! Thank you very much for that review. I did start to feel as though I'm having a little problem with gerunds in sentences. Obviously, I overuse them. ...
May 9, 2011 -
Re: The Devil's Pocket Watch (1)
Pacific’s front hooves took off and Kris’s heart nearly stopped as she went midair. Everything went quiet for those mere seconds besides the breath she sucked in. Pacific touched down ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Madness During my Solitude
Thank you very much for the review. There is no clear description or details about my MC, because this is the 14th chapter and I've already went through most things ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Madness During my Solitude
Thank you very much! That piece, even though it's short, is very important to me. Emmy, thank you so much. The narrator is a guy and I certainly pointed that ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Stalking My Stalker
Hahaha! Yea, it's an idiotic stalker you got there. Too much ego to not notice that you're watching him too. I loved it!
May 7, 2011 -
Re: The Heartbreaker 1
I'm saving my spot to review later! :D
May 6, 2011 -
Re: Another Obnoxious Blade
Thank you very much, everybody! Each and every one of you is right! When I reread this thing, I realized that Aurora wasn't really Aurora there, if you know what ...
May 5, 2011