Gheala

Hello, hello! I'm Gheal and I have to say that I haven't reviewed anything for months. Your piece is going to be my first and I'm honored ^^ ----------------------------------------------------- Alrig

First, and before I even introduce myself, I have to say a small thought I have in mind: You bewildered me. You took me aback by the beauty of the ...

Hello, hello! I'm Gheala and this is my first review after ages of literary silence. ***************************************** I have to admit I'm going to say something that I had NEVER said ...

Hellos, hellos! I so missed your writing, Pinko. I will start reading and await the inspiration your words always grant me... No jokes there. But I'll use something other than ...

Hello, hello! I so want to read this. ------------------------------------------ Wild yellow grass stooped under its own weight, sagging more and more as it got nearer to the edge of the ...

The red wine bottle was on the floor, the red liquid looked like blood as it pooled around the shards of glass. You used "red" twice here. You could make ...

Hello! Gheala here. --------------------------------- The trials is a test that Guardian initiates undergo to test their skill. The first test covers magic ability and knowledge. The second test cover

Well, obviously everyone already commented on the huge font you used. There is no need to use such a big font, while we clicked the link of your story to ...

Hell, Gheala here! I'm sorry if you find me a harsh reviewer, but it's for good causes! ----------------------------- As far as James was concerned, he was willing to risk life ...

Hello! Gheala here! Sorry if I'm too harsh somewhere in the review, but it's for good reasons! ----------------------------- I was kind of crawling around, although at an extreme speed. "Kind ...

Hello, Gheala here! I keep my childhood safe in an old green-lidded shoebox, the safe brown cardboard sides reminiscent of all those art projects and crafts, from cardboard houses to ...

Hello, Gheala here. Hm.. You obviously need to practice and write more poetry because that one wasn't quite good. A poem should be longer than this to deliver a nice ...

Hello! Gheala here! ---------------------------------- Lying on the roof all was silent and all was dark; he could barely make out his surroundings in the blanket of thick black fog that ...

Hello! Gheala here! -------------------------------- It was a sunny day in March, I was chilled to the bone. I hadn't eaten,was defecient of starch, you left me to corrode, a statue ...

Hello, I'm Gheala. I'm sometimes too harsh with the reviewing, but it's all for good reasons! :D ------------------------------ Gerald and Natalie did not try force a conversation as Pierce ate. ...