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Re: Bobo (Upward Dog)
This was lovely. I'm so sorry that happened and you needed to write this in the first place. We had to put our cat down a couple years ago because ...
Nov 19, 2021 -
Re: Will
I noticed some grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors. "The plants grows/the clouds hangs/the trees bends" Should be "the plants grow/the clouds hang/the trees bend." "or what i've done" I should ...
Apr 19, 2021 -
Re: Normal
Ok. I'm here for a quick review. First off, this is interesting. The idea that no matter how hard you try to be normal, you'll always be odd, is relatable ...
Jan 15, 2021 -
Re: The LGBT+ community from a Christain's prespective.
1. Gender is a human construct. 2. Saying with certainty whether something is right or wrong based on the Bible is impossible, because not everyone believes in God. 3. I ...
Jan 10, 2021 -
Re: Endangered - Chapter 1
Um. What can I say? This was a delight to read. I can't say I ever expected a Pokemon story to be thought provoking, but I was pleasantly surprised! I ...
Jan 5, 2021 -
Re: The Last City: Chapter 1
Hiiiii! Georgie here to give a review. First up, this is really interesting. I like the mystery, the intrigue, the possibility for this story to continue in any way. I ...
Jan 5, 2021 -
Re: ...
Hey! This was really fun to read. There's a lot of imagery I enjoyed, and even though it's comparatively short to other pieces, Anne is an evocative character. I felt ...
Jan 4, 2021 -
Re: Chapter One - A Tale of Two Songs
Hello there! Here's a review to contemplate or ignore. First off: interesting. Very interesting. I like the imagery, the evocation of this place and these people. It's very immersive. I ...
Jan 3, 2021 -
Re: Stranger journey to Plymouth
Hey! This is very interesting. It's obviously a historical fiction letter assignment, which is always fun. I only noticed a few things to be improved upon (although I'm sure your ...
Dec 23, 2020 -
Re: No Bravery Without Fear
Wowza! This was so interesting to read. I'm really invested despite the subjectively short length, and due to your excellent (though not obtrusive) exposition, I feel like I can follow ...
Dec 23, 2020 -
Re: Becoming the Big Bad Wolf
Wow! This was really interesting. I loved it! Was NOT expecting that twist towards the end. Honestly, I'm sold on both versions of this wolf, be it half human or ...
Dec 22, 2020 -
Re: Get Out Alive (parts 1 + 2: captured and needles)
It was very interesting and FUN to read. Evocative characters and events, and the opening paragraphs were very sensory. I particularly enjoyed reading Florence's dialogue, and also his initial descrip
Dec 22, 2020
