Genesis

Hello Mystique, I'm Genesis and I'll be your Reviewer for today! First thing I noticed there was a lot of capitalization errors, I believe it takes away from the poem ...

Hello StellaThomas, I'm Genesis and I'll be reviewing your work today. This was good, very good, it draws in the reader, sets the atmosphere gives details. There was very little ...

Hello ka67, I'm Genesis and this is your review. First off that I liked about the story was the creepy atmosphere you gave this story. As I read it I ...

Hello Okuro, I'm Genesis and this your Review. First off this is a rather sad song once you think about it, you talk about friends yet we see the characters ...

Hello TheNeoAceofAll, I'm Genesis and I'll be your Reviewer for this chapter and hopefully your entire novel. First what caught me was the title, I'm sorry to say but I ...

Hello EnigmaticSpirit, I'm Genesis and I'll be your reviewer today! First off, the emotion and conflict is astounding. I actually felt as if you may have been writing from experience ...

Hello thestorygirl! I am Genesis and I am here with your review! First off was something I didn't like, you gave no details to the settings. Which I found a ...

Hey Blackwood! I'm Genesis and I'll be doing your review today, I hope it isn't to bad! First off is the fact I got immersed into this while reading it, ...

Hiya! I'm Genesis, and I'll be doing you a review today! First off, it was a good thing I read Niteowl's review first, because I simply didn't understand some of ...

Hiya! I'm Genesis and I'll do a quick over review for you if you don't mind! So first the rhyme scheme, loved it and I believe it worked really well ...

I liked this song, though I felt it was missing a good pull in. Cause the opening didn't really call to me and tell me this is a song I ...