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D'aww... Hi there, sarebear. Yes, I think you achieved your goal. This is truly beautiful. However, I have a problem with it; your poem has periods, but you forgot the ...

Hi there, PenPrincess. I'm here to review as requested. :) Okay, nice touch with the picture. Oh, wow. Lol. The subject you're bringing us is pretty impressive, I must say. ...

Ohhai there, snickerdooly. You're a great poet, I'll start by saying that. You take words, and a simple situation, and then transform it into art, that is what a good ...

Hi there, Flower~Child! Hey, I like this. You managed to give us a great imagery and you expressed everything neatly and originally. :D Although, I have something to suggest... you ...

Wow. Hi there, Abid155! First off, thank you! For bringing us a topic that has not been worn out by other writers, and for expressing it in an interesting way. ...

Hi there, WrittenInStone. Amazing. I love how you worded this poem, originally and beautiful at the same time. I only have one problem with it. Just by looking at it, ...

Hi there, my friend! :D

Hi there, Eimear! I like this... and your avatar

Oh, geez! :O Hi there, Amy! You have no idea how much I loved this. Probably cause I know what you're talking about... xD But you managed to make it ...

Bahaha... Hi there, ofir. This is short, but I think it is great! It's amazing how you can make something so interesting out of a few words. Your lines flow ...

RobsterJames! Another priceless topic. Amazing job, boy. It was to the point, concise and complete. It flows greatly, it rhymes and makes sense, and the message just let me amazed. ...

Hi there, Renn. Woah, this is the longest poem I've ever read... I think. But reading it was definitely worth it. Your first stanza, I'd work on it to make ...

Wow. Hi Sianniiee. Geez! You're really talente. You made this flow magically. Pure art and I mean it. O.O Though, it could look more professional; You forgot some apostrophes, and ...

Lol. Hi there, Zombirrel. Baahaahah... Even drunk you manage to make your poems flow. Great job. The only thing I have to say is something that makes me shiver and ...

Hi there, KattieCurtis. Hmm... your writing is really nice. You have talent; you brought us a nice subject, you use good wording, and it flows well. I only have one ...