Gardevite

Gosh darn :( spelling and grammar errors, I will fix them immediately! You should visit Ireland if you think no-one actually says 'k' xD it's everyone's catchphrase! Also thank you ...

wow! The last stanza especially.....Wow!

Ohh thank you so much! Your input is greatly appreciated! About the spelling errors, I submitted this from my android phone, and a good way to sum up what happened ...

I feel like you're the greatest adversary of 'The Knights Of The Green Room' because your work is so precise, exact and flabberghasting that they are very hard to review. ...

Fortis seriously stop toying with my emojis. (I'm officially an internet and my emotions are now emojis) So yeah good job fortis :3

(I can't believe I checked this!) Duty has actually been here longer than you. X3 And since I'm too lazy to review, or even add a second commend because it's ...

Okay now I see where you're coming from. (side note: you should probably move this from short story to article/essay)

Well I get that, but I think you are, almost scolding people for dreaming of being a great author. Nothing is perfect, and I agree with you there but people ...

I feel pike you're trying to discourage people from writing, and I'm not sure why.

;)

Thanks, and yes I did. Heroin is often cut with painkillers.

It's closed now. :( actually closed today!

Her was the girl from Alex's house, and I'm not sure what you mean by 'neighbor girl'

Thanks Eloquent! I appreciate your input! This is actually for @Iggy 's contest xD Yeah this was written up pretty quickly. I wanted to get it done before I go ...

There will be more :D just you wait! Also thanks for pointing out the errors :D