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Hello :D Hightop here to review your poem :), Firstly, that title. It just drew me in. It's funny and actually does explain a fair amount of the poem so ...

Hey there, Hightop here to review your poem. lets get to it Firstly, that little note to the reader should be at the start or end of the poem. NO ...

Hello :) I think you did a really good job in conveying the feelings of entrapment and fear. I just wanted to chime in on the scientific facts of butterflies. ...

Hello :D, Hightop here to review your work, I'm going to take it stanza by stanza, and then give you an overall impression. Now, ONWARD! Stanza One- This is a ...

Hello niteowl :), I just thought I'd write something quick because I really liked your poem. At first, I thought that the speaker was maybe her father, but then I ...

Hello :), I found your story very interesting. Although I think it should be in the fan fiction category. I am a fan of madness in characters, I love to ...

Hello, review time :) First I'm going to correct some spelling/grammar. :) In your second paragraph it says "People rarely come up to me." That should be "People would rarely ...

Hello :), review coming to you via android, so please excuse the odd out of place word, because of autocorrect :), now onward! I thought your poem was simply beautiful, ...

Hello there, fellow sugar lover :), I really enjoyed your poem, I found it interesting to read. I love how you compare sugary sweets to cocaine. They really are addictive ...

Hi :), For starters, I think paragraphs could be an aid to you in this poem. For example: "The curtain swings, rushing back into its recluse; allowing clean, white light ...

IT'S REVIEW TIME, COME ON AND GRAB YOUR FRIENDS! Okay, the first thing I want to bring up is your obvious hatred of modern teenagers, which seems unjust, you never ...

YES! This poem is amazing! I love poems that personify death. Usually It's death conversing with a person, so this is a fun change. I love how you portray death ...

Hi, I just loved this. :) It was very descriptive, and left no gray patches, so well done, you told your story well. :) Secondly, the F-A-L-L-I-N-G effect you have ...

Hi, Firstly, I thought the emotion you expressed in this poem was great! I knew it was not just about a friend. You got your message so simply, it was ...

Hi, I feel that, as a person who went through something similar, that you conveyed those emotions perfectly. It was a very emotional, good poem, that I found interesting. Now ...