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Hey, I'm Hightop, here to review your poem! :D A storm has just ended, Even though its still raining.[/quote I think the words "Even though" are interrupting the flow of ...

Hey, last review on this (I'm not doing the side stories). I'm going to review it now because it's 3:30am and I'm tired af. Prof. Oak: "This wave is called ...

Back to review. This chapter seems short, so I doubt that this review will be that long. On to business :D Ethan and Mie have now reached where they needed ...

Back again. You know the drill by now. :D Ethan used an Ultra Ball from inside his hat. You made it sound like this had been mentioned before. I saw ...

Accidental double submission.

Another as requested review! Again, these are suggestions, not insults. Now on to business! Firstly, you have the story split into parts, and then that into chapters? I'm confused. Maybe ...

At request, I'm here to review. Remember that these are only suggestions, and not insults. (Because of what happened last time, just felt it needed to be said). Okay on ...

Hey Hightop here to review-day to review! :D Firstly, on your layout, this is very attractive to look at, but overall serves no purpose. I feel like it's kind of ...

I wanted to save reviews until review day, but I stumbled onto your poem, and I'm going to review it now because I'd just forget. XD Let's get to business ...

Hey Gravity! Hightop here, warming up my reviewing skills for Review Day. :) Let's get to it! First thing that irked me during my reading was stanza four. I felt ...

This is a bit old, but I'll give you a full length review Okay, I'm Hightop, also, a very, very big pokemon fan. This will be fun to review. :) ...

Wow. This is a very nice work! You categorized it as a 'speech', which is a tiny bit off for me. A speech is intended to be spoken to audience, ...

I finally got around to reading this :) First off, I'm impressed on how much you could write about such a short moment in time. It's a very hard thing ...

What up fellow Lantern warrior! Ima review now! Alright your rhyming worked good here. I'm not a huge fan of rhyming but it worked here. On punctuation you used a ...

Hey there! Review day review! Awww not to be patronising, but that poem was very cute! I loved it! So on good points we have: your onimanipaya (sorry for the ...