Galerius

It's decent for a ten-second poem, but the first line seems painfully obvious and there's no need to include exclamation points at the end of every line.

She said "Life is unfair" "Life isn't unfair, we're just fools That don't enjoy it properly" I replied The last line is too blunt. I don't mean to say that ...

This wouldn't happen to be about me, would it? :P

haha hey, i can compliment people too, just...not as often as others do.

i have to admit it...this was pretty good compared to your other pieces. full review coming soon when i have some more time.

i will critique this soon; check this spot in a few hours.

Oh my God "save it and shock me" ?!?! Galerius you are so hard to please! nope, just a connoisseur.

We can be anywhere just you and me. We can go anywhere just wait and see. This is the way it's got to be, I'll wait for you...if you wait ...

I would have thought this was quite clear. The second line is written in the first person, therefore it is evident that 'his' is referring to the preacher. It could ...

to be honest, i wasnt trying to write a successful poem. like i mentioned, i wrote this when i was bored. as with all my other poems. in fact, i ...

this, my friends, is plagiarism. For further reading, please see:

If you remain a tiny rose Alone behind the log— A Tree, immense, denies the rain— You’re motionless in fog— dont capitalize "tree" and dont contract "you are" into "you're"; ...

in that case, you made the meaning cloudy by switching the phrases "dream" and "reality". when you said that your fictional lover ceases to exist in your dreams, i took ...

in that case, you made the meaning cloudy by switching the phrases "dream" and "reality". when you said that your fictional lover ceases to exist in your dreams, i took ...

yeah, this is old...lol, i would have ripped this apart if missy hadn't reminded us that it was a year old. thanks, and i'll check out some of your newer ...