Galerius

I have to say, this is much better. And I mean much better. Little girl, you've wandered so far... Lost the light of your guiding star, Blinded by darkness, tearing ...

There is always one to believe in: God, Gods, spirits, people... we always need somebody or some thing to believe in to. Why did you include "people" in there? It ...

the year is 2075, i am a part of the protect, and lead program formed by the underground. and these are dark times. this is my story. Ack. No no ...

What is this? I'm sorry, but I refuse to critique this in a more in-depth analysis because at first glance, it is full of cliches, bland language, metaphor-dry lines, poor ...

I step aside, I watch you cry. My soul is torn apart. I want to stop the pain you feel. I want to soothe your aching heart. You push me ...

Da qualche parte nel cuore di Roma By Angel of Death They've all crowded around in one spot Their cameras are flashing and their artificial lights are blocking my eyes ...

I watched him as his world of ‘booze’ drowned him away, I watched the only way he ‘helped’ his pain. I don't like that you've put the words "booze" and ...

When you smile, you remind me of a cliche of you and I of happier days. What a surprise! This entire poem reminds me of a cliche, the Cliche of ...

Last night you ran, chasing the sunset with your camera lens, wishing the trees and houses could disappear. First problem: Why the line breaks like that? Line breaks should always ...

I never want to lose you, But I know I will one day Sometimes the scariest things are true. I hope the skies will always be blue, But they always ...

It has been a year and three months since the Election of 2096, which arguably was the worst event in America's history since the Great Depression of 2037. The election ...

From the very start It was true love, I knew you held my heart, Surely you were sent from above, Cupid had played a part. You had to be a ...

Sleep Comes when I shut my eyes I go to a place where I might fly Where I almost never cry A place I could meet that one guy Somewhere ...

this was a good poem with taste and actual metaphor that i had to read over a few times to understand; i enjoy poetry like that, poetry that makes me ...

here, let me shorten this poem for you: "i love you and you love me! whee!" ...i'm sorry, i cant even critique this properly because frankly i'm not sure how ...