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Well, that was interesting. Another reason why we all need a show on the Animal Channel. It certainly was funny, and random. And twilight haters will love it (if you ...

First of all, welcome to YWS, Black Rain! This was a very good first entry. The first two verses were not very good at rhyming, but still laid down the ...

It's a pretty good romance song. Sounds like things you'd say to a real girlfriend, and maybe she'd love you back. Aside for some problems with rhyming, it was a ...

The rhymes are the best thing I can say. See, there are a couple of things you did wrong. Now, one major thing is that you need to have posted ...

OMG. That's like a cartoon, with the super cute and nice girl/guy/animal/monster going all evil. And it makes fun of how everything else on this board has dark meaning(but then, ...

LOL. Just, LOL. I mean, you made me laugh so many times in this it was like reading... well... a funny Twilight parody. Not implying, but Paws will be the ...

Nice job! I yet to read the complete thing, but good job. I dislike the cliffhanger, but that technically is how all stories go, I guess... anyway, great description. Two ...

LOL. That was just... awesome. It totally describes the annoyance of Sims. You have to control every single aspect of their life, because they can't move two steps without you ...