Galatea

I really enjoy random emotional rants.

*nodds in approval* I have trained you well, young one. Good answer.

Nice and eartheral, good work!

*blinks* That's DIRTY.

Why blue? I dunno...his poetry is over-all usually blue. Dunno why.

Thanks so much you guys, I really appreciate it. I would really like some constructive feedback though. Syntax, format, word choice, rhythm etc. etc. I'm so glad you all liked ...

this is my first decent piece in a long time, i'd really appreciate some feedback

I agree that some of your enjambed lines seem a little out of place, but other than that, this is a smashing piece. Your work just keeps improving, Incan. Good ...

*Laughs out loud* I LOVE your reference to The Hollow Men. It absolutley made my night. Good show!

Chevy, I understand your sentiment, however this is a poetry forum and our goal here is to critique the poetry to assist the poet in growing and becoming better. Incan ...

I'm not going to tell y'all the theme. Part of reading and critiquing poetry is being able to come to a decision about each piece on your own.

I wrote this as an exercise for a creative writing class, and fell in love with it thereafter. I suppose I should refrain from posting poems I am simply proud ...

This one is on the fridge in my dorm.... languid beauty a purple woman so true gone away in sleep rain hits my gift I trudge frantic willing an ache ...

Thank you so much, Incandescence! You're so sweet to say. I honestly didn't expect such a sparkling comment, but I really appreciate it.

uhmm....more magentic poetry.... they say purple is bitter through time an enourmous bed shakes but a cool summer sleep like winter never leaves a mother to sing from bare pink ...