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Hey I liked this poem, based on the fact it is presented almost like spoken language. The description of lips is very good. :) keep it up!

hahahah it reminded me of that too! :) Thanks Matthew.

Thankyou popatemyheart1994 whoever you are. :)

well, the 'her' part is meant to represent someone who is aware i'm going to kill myself. It is supposed to be my best friend and even though she is ...

This is the only poem in my collection where it rhymes, so be kind when reviewing. :) Oh, and i wrote this a while back so if it's not as ...

Hey, i really liked your poem. It made me hungry. :) Keep it up!

hi, i really liked this poem. I thought you planned it out well and added a lot of detail. Well done! :)

This poem is very cute and i enjoyed reading it. :) I love your profile picture by the way, i too - am a star wars fan.

Hi, to answer your questions the poem is essentially about a woman trapped in a marriage where she does love her husband, he isn't abusive but he is superior to ...

I thought this poem was really sweet. :) Well done.

Hi, I really liked your poem because you planned it out so well, i could read it easily and couldn't find a fault. :) Well done.

I'm sorry if this poem seems confusing, to me it makes sense but i can understand how it can't at times. The poem is essentially about when I'm apart from ...

Thanks for the comment 'White Rabbit' i was writing about a person i really liked and how when we aren't together i feel really sad, in a 'hell unknown' and ...

Thanks so much for the comment 'EdgarAllenPoe' and for the warm welcome. :)

Your poem is so beautiful, i really enjoyed it.