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THANK YOU! I liked this one a few days after I wrote it, but now I don't... To xxxImperfectlyPerfectxxx --It's true, she is pregnant. GOOD JOB! I think you were ...

Thanks to you all! You really helped me on this! For all of you who don't like it as a sunflower, I tried telling the reader those are the little ...

Nice! I liked this! It was really wrid, because at a moment I found a theme while culling through, but then rereading it I found another and another. So tell ...

Mmm. Yay! First person ever to answer to one of the critiques so fully. Okay, so... the only thing that confuses you is the blue, right? Well, I use blue ...

OH-and why does it only say Nine Eleven Th? Where's the rest?

Mmmmmmmmmmmmm.... Much, much better. The only problem is that there's too much goodness. That makes it sticky. That makes it messy. What you need to do is combine sentences together--that ...

OOoooo forgot such an important part: Separate the last sentence into "While smoke rises from velvet underneath your blue feet." (see how I added the blue and changed beneath ro ...

I actually saw the movie before the book, I think, because I liked the movie... but of course, the book was so much better! Plus, it has so much information ...

Hi people.

I really like this! It's comical in a way, but could also be an authentic story. Awesome rhymes, too! (squeeze, please) I WANT MORE! MORE VERSES PLEASE!

Sorry to critique again....it's just that I returned to this poem and I thought, "Oooooh, where do I remember this from?" And then I saw my critique. Whcih brings me ...

Wow! I like this a lot. What do you mean it isn't yours? Who is Stella?

Oops! Sorry! I'll try to read it in a different light now. "metres" British! :) "yellow sport shirt rippled across his muscular abs" This is kind of cliche. Can't he ...

This was really intellectual. Bizarre. Complex. And only in three lines!

Oh. Well, now that I know it's not original... DARN IT! I hate it when things aren't original. It's the thing that upsets me the most. Well, thank you very ...