Published July 20, 2007
A sitting duck
Woman, please don't get offended,
I didn't mean what I said.
It's only one of those deep insecurities
you worry about so much
when I said that you were easy
I meant it metaphorically.
But you took the wrong way (typical)
it's the way it's meant to be
chorus
I didn't mean to make it sound so hard
I didn't mean to make it hurt you
when I said you were a sitting duck
all I meant was you were an easy
(so easy to squeeze)
(So hard to please)
you make it sound like a bad thing
you make it sound like a mistake
true, I may not be smooth with the girls
but at least I'm not a fake
chorus
I didn't mean to make it sound so hard
I didn't mean to make it hurt you
when I said you were a sitting duck
all I meant was you were an easy
(so easy to squeeze)
(So hard to please)
(fade out)
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do u write from experience or do u just make it up as u go?
I really like this! It's comical in a way, but could also be an authentic story. Awesome rhymes, too! (squeeze, please)
I WANT MORE! MORE VERSES PLEASE!