Gadi.

Nice! It's not the best, but it's pretty good. Some suggestions: "I reflect on nothing." Ugh. Nasty line. Awkward, too much. It doesn't have a tune to it, especially as ...

WOW. I love this poem! It's very professional, and completely full of originality, wit, and description. The ending, however, is poor. Usually, good poems end with an image, a metaphoe, ...

"Emptiness inside of a person is really a drain of life. A happiness long forgotten. " This seemed very cliche, plus it's a tell, not show. Make sure to describe ...

This was so good! The only problem I had with it was that sometimes I thought it was too good. Sometimes, all the intellectual goodness of the story seemed to ...

Ugh. Rap is okay, but this one, if made into real song, would be really bad. SORRY! It's just that rap is only good if it's: A) Unique, like is ...

I am doing a face filled with a deep blank. What the heck? I really could not understand this poem, sorry. I mean, it has a universal theme. Too universal. ...

Sorry, Lucy, but I didn't like this. I mean, it had some nice concepts...but the portrayal, the rhythm, the elements...na. I think you should either work harder on this piece ...

"Manizha was halfway aware of the fact " At first glance it was rather confusing. Otherise, excellent beginning! "Clinging to her cornhusk doll, Sally," At first I thought you switched ...

Excellent! "we didn’t mind;'" That kind of stops the flow. Maybe put it in the next line, or maybe delete the "When" in the beginning of the sentence. "it was ...

The opening didn't really catch my attention. I am not looking for intense action, just for some interesting line or subject. "Alien breath" is excellent, but after that, I don't ...

This story was kind of cliche. And how did the father killed his daughter? Or am I getting it all wrong? Even though the first ending is very...climatic, they are ...

Nice. Okay, I started this and thought: It sounds good, but what is the meaning? What does it say? I mean, behind all the words, does it have anything? But ...

Okay. I agree with everyone above: this has potential to it, especially the first paragraph. The second, uh...not so much. It was a little cliche. And we REALLY don't understand ...

I liked it. It's not amazing, but it had a...unique personality to it, if you know what I mean. First off, does the bench have any symbolism? Does it connect ...

Why was this dull? Because it was an article. It was like a newspaper review of a camp, with no intrigue or really any original method of presenting information. You ...