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Hi, This is GG! I want to say that i was surprised by the ending because i expected Sophie to be older since she seemed so responsible and mature. Also, ...

This is my first time reading this story, so i don't really know what's going on, but i like the fact that even though i don't really know what is ...

Hi marmalade! I hope you have a nice day! I just want to say that this is a beautiful poem. You really have a way with words and how to ...

Hi nishthabawa2896! After reading, i really think you put a lot of feelings into this. My idea is that if he thinks you don't understand him even though you do, ...

Hello! First thing that i noticed when reading your story was your organization. I noticed that you tend to mix dialogues and descriptions together, making it hard to follow. I ...

Aye, hi! I must say that i tried and failed many times to sing this; and i finally came to an agreement that i could only rap this one out. ...

Hi there! From reading your story, i feel like you should have more description of the scene actions. You have an equal balance of dialogues and descriptions which i think ...

Hi there! First of all, this is a very emotional piece of writing, and i am really sorry for your grandfather. Your writing and the way you describe him also ...

Hi there! From reading your story, I've found some minor changes that have to do with your organization. You have some conversations that i think should be separated into smaller ...

It looks like your goal is fear in this poem and you've achieved it! The way you write the poem makes it flow smoothly. You also left a sense of ...

Before i write my review, i want to say that i am so moved by your title. I have the exact same problem, and i can clearly understand your writing ...

To be honest, your poem gives me goosebumps! Had that actually happened? I mean you can describe that so clearly that its easy for me to paint that picture in ...

Meaningful and sad. Seriously. I don't know if you post this for a review on the poem or an advice on how you, feel, but i am telling you both. ...

In my opinion, i think that you should balance the conversation part and the description part equally. Its like your conversation part nearly takes up most of the page. It ...