Frosting

Awesome! I loved reading that! Now onto business. Personally, I feel the Author's Note should be in italics, and at the beginning. "Sire, a well reputed singer has come requesting, ...

Frosting here for your loyal reviewing! I liked it. DOWN TO BUSINESS! :D Well, sometimes you wrote your quotes in the middle of your paragraph, and sometimes you spaced them. ...

Oh my god. This is so cool. Literally speechless. DOWN TO BUSINESS! From what I saw, you made little to no mistakes. You really know how to hook someone in. ...

Hi there! I'm Frosting. I liked this piece, and it has good potential. Now for the business part. You jump around quite a bit during past and presence. The past ...

Two words. Loved. It. Down to business, then? I saw no errors, you were just...amazing. This poem spoke to me. I felt like I could connect. You make some great ...

Amazing! Aside from a few grammatical mistakes, I liked it. Now down to le business. First off, you had a lot of grammar mistakes. You should probably spell check next ...

Well. I liked it. Down to business, then. I noticed a few grammatical issues, as well as inconsistency with your spacing. In multitudes of your paragraphs, you wrote your sentences ...

Loved it! I really hope you continue to write this. It had amazing detail, and I could feel June's pain in the beginning! I really hope that he does find ...

Love, love, LOVE! I am speechless. The ending was perfect. Donna truly connects with you, and I felt her absolute shock when Christina stood in the doorway. When I read ...

Oh my god! I loved this! PLEASE write more! It's an amazing story. In all, there was really nothing I would change. Maybe have her bring her horse, but that's ...

Hi! I really enjoyed reading this. The details were quite nice! I very much liked this sentence, because it not only explained the uniform, but it wasn't too detailed, and ...