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Re: Abarith: Seekers of the Arcane Throne (Prologue)
Really interesting, i want to read the next part. Very Good
Feb 18, 2008 -
Re: Jeepers
haha this is hilarious!! his mom is so weird. this is a cliffhanger so you have to write a part 2!!!
Oct 8, 2007 -
Re: The Tyran Menace
hmm.. very descriptive, very good for a prolugue. i like the idea, but i still dont get what the main idea is, well i guess i don't need to since ...
Oct 8, 2007 -
Re: I Was A Teenage Bus-Rider
really good, even though i ain't that big a poetry fan. I like the idea. Nice work!
Oct 6, 2007 -
Re: Clone ch 3
still interesting, but for chapters there pretty short. you could make them a little longer. i cant wait for chapter 4!
Oct 5, 2007 -
Re: Clone ch. 2
this is nice and interesting, nice dialogue. But would "throne" really be a good word to describe the president?
Oct 5, 2007 -
Re: Clone
this is really good, i want to read the rest of this story. You describe whats going on really well.
Oct 5, 2007 -
Re: Evolved Wars
pretty hard to understand, put more detail. But overall i like the story
Oct 5, 2007 -
Re: Squirty's Tearless Shampoo
This is hilarious!! You should right comercials for a living!! By the way I used that stuff and now i can see the future :smt003
Oct 4, 2007 -
Re: beneath the shadows
There were a few mistakes as the guys above pointed out, but overall a great story! Keep it up!
Oct 3, 2007 -
Re: The Lich Dragon
Dude the first was good but the second was AWESOME!! This could make a pretty good book.
Sep 28, 2007