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Fran94

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Once You Were My Best Friend

    Hello! Your poem was quite interesting. I like how I can easily feel your emotions and experience that feeling. For me, I think poetry should just give the reader a ...

    Apr 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The changes within

    I really like this poem. I am happy that you cross-rhyme in this poem. Great job! For example, "I’m moving forward, But to what end? Is this the emergence of ...

    Apr 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Seashore memories

    Hello! It's me again! I absolutely like this poem! I truly like the message in this poem, which is, to me, a remarkable sight will always stay in your memories. ...

    Apr 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Rain

    Hello! I really like this poem! I like the main idea in this poem, which is, to me, the speaker wanting to be one with the rain and be taken ...

    Apr 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: My Conviction

    Hello! I really like this poem! It is very interesting. I especially like the message in it, which is to escape reality, write to your heart's content. That's a really ...

    Apr 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A Perfect Image

    Hello! This is a great poem! I really like this poem! I like the imagery in the poem and your vocabulary. The poem's imagery is visually interesting and your vocabulary ...

    Apr 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Although My Life is Passing by

    Hello! I must say- this is a really good poem! I like the rhyming scheme and the end-rhymes in the poem, especially "think" and "brink," "ask" and "task," and "pass" ...

    Apr 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Place Where the West Wind Blows

    Hello! I really like this poem. I just really like your vocabulary and the imagery in the poem. Your vocabulary is just so intricate and the imagery is just so ...

    Apr 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Old Car

    I like this poem. It is awesome! I like the tone of the poem, which is pride. I like the details in the poem, too. For example, "Fine steely-gray interior, ...

    Apr 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: deleted

    Hello, it's me again! Yes, I am unofficially following you! Scary, right? :) Anyway, I really like the message in the poem! The message is to live life to the ...

    Apr 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: An Ode to American Idol

    This is a cute and lightly funny poem. I like the ending. "The rooms filled with laughter and smiles and glee/ good thing next year the winner will be me." ...

    Mar 31, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Escape (or Wings, which one do you think is better?)

    Hello! This is a pretty good poem! I like the details in the poem. For example, "Sometimes while sitting idle When there's nothing much to be done I wish I ...

    Mar 31, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Music wins this war

    What a splendid poem! I truly enjoyed reading it. I really didn't care that it was long, I just kept reading it because the poem just kept my interest for ...

    Mar 31, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: RED

    Hello, this is a cute poem! I like the imagery in this poem. For example, "Hold me unproperly and my thorns will/ poke you til your finger starts to bleed.." ...

    Mar 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Waiting in a field of grass

    This is a good poem even though it is raw. I really like the imagery in the poem. For example, "hoping perhaps, that the tea kettle cloud in the sky ...

    Mar 30, 2011


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