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Re: :(
Hello! I have to say this is an interesting poem. First off, I suggest that you don't put :( as your title because, normally, people write words that make the ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: the uprising
Hello! This is a pretty good poem! I can tell that the poem's main idea is that the girl the speaker talks about hides her love for the boy with ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Child of misfortune
Hello! I just wanted to review one of your works. Anyway, I think this poem is a pretty good poem. I really like the imagery, which is very visually interesting. ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Believe
Hello! I think this poem is better than the other one I reviewed. I really, really, really like the imagery, the concrete details, and the message in the poem! The ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: **Haven't really thought of a title**
Hello! This is a pretty good poem, even if it is a bit vague. To start off, kudos for keeping your rhyme scheme consistent! My high school teacher once said ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Thank You and Farewell
Hello! This is a very well-written and, at the same time, confusing poem. Yet, I see what is going on. There are two people talking here, I think. One is ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: The world
Hello! I like this poem! I really enjoy reading it! I really like the imagery and how concrete it is. For example, "Your vision's blurred, The world obscured, By snow ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Day In, Day Out
Hello! I hate to admit this, but... I don't really like this poem. Okay, this is me just being blunt. I'm not trying to be mean or anything, my review ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Sin
Hello! What a brilliant and well-written poem! I must say, you have quite a knack for writing poetry. Well, so far. I'd have to look at your other poems that ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Illusions
Hello! This is truly an emotional poem. I can feel the sadness and pain in this poem and can really understand what the speaker is saying. The speaker is saying ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Dance
Hello! I have to say great job it is very good! I really like the imagery in this! For example, "Wild, rapid movements, / With which I express myself." Now ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Crying in Silence
Hi! Once again, you have proven that you can touch someone's emotions and, at the same time, keep them interested in the poem. In the poem, I felt your pain ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: Wondrous Mother Earth
What a beautiful poem! I also admire and really like nature! I really like the imagery in this poem. It just makes the reader visualize like the "violet flower" and ...
Apr 24, 2011 -
Re: Possession
Hello! I really like this poem. I really like how you center on the word unavailable. For example, "Unavailable is a beautiful word I am Unavailable My tongue curves around ...
Apr 24, 2011 -
Re: The Chronicles Of Color
Hello! I just wanted to say that this is a very unique poem. Quite interesting! I could tell that you were naming things that were colored blue and things that ...
Apr 23, 2011
