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Fran94

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: :(

    Hello! I have to say this is an interesting poem. First off, I suggest that you don't put :( as your title because, normally, people write words that make the ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: the uprising

    Hello! This is a pretty good poem! I can tell that the poem's main idea is that the girl the speaker talks about hides her love for the boy with ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Child of misfortune

    Hello! I just wanted to review one of your works. Anyway, I think this poem is a pretty good poem. I really like the imagery, which is very visually interesting. ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Believe

    Hello! I think this poem is better than the other one I reviewed. I really, really, really like the imagery, the concrete details, and the message in the poem! The ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: **Haven't really thought of a title**

    Hello! This is a pretty good poem, even if it is a bit vague. To start off, kudos for keeping your rhyme scheme consistent! My high school teacher once said ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Thank You and Farewell

    Hello! This is a very well-written and, at the same time, confusing poem. Yet, I see what is going on. There are two people talking here, I think. One is ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The world

    Hello! I like this poem! I really enjoy reading it! I really like the imagery and how concrete it is. For example, "Your vision's blurred, The world obscured, By snow ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Day In, Day Out

    Hello! I hate to admit this, but... I don't really like this poem. Okay, this is me just being blunt. I'm not trying to be mean or anything, my review ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sin

    Hello! What a brilliant and well-written poem! I must say, you have quite a knack for writing poetry. Well, so far. I'd have to look at your other poems that ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Illusions

    Hello! This is truly an emotional poem. I can feel the sadness and pain in this poem and can really understand what the speaker is saying. The speaker is saying ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Dance

    Hello! I have to say great job it is very good! I really like the imagery in this! For example, "Wild, rapid movements, / With which I express myself." Now ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Crying in Silence

    Hi! Once again, you have proven that you can touch someone's emotions and, at the same time, keep them interested in the poem. In the poem, I felt your pain ...

    Apr 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Wondrous Mother Earth

    What a beautiful poem! I also admire and really like nature! I really like the imagery in this poem. It just makes the reader visualize like the "violet flower" and ...

    Apr 24, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Possession

    Hello! I really like this poem. I really like how you center on the word unavailable. For example, "Unavailable is a beautiful word I am Unavailable My tongue curves around ...

    Apr 24, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Chronicles Of Color

    Hello! I just wanted to say that this is a very unique poem. Quite interesting! I could tell that you were naming things that were colored blue and things that ...

    Apr 23, 2011


I only know that learning to believe in the power of my own words has been the most freeing experience of my life. It has brought me the most light. And isn't that what a poem is? A lantern glowing in the dark.
— Elizabeth Acevedo, The Poet X