FourLeafClover

Thanks for the review! Yeah, you're right, I need to work on the rhythm. Thank you, and I hope you have a great rest of your day!

Thanks for the review! Yeah, you're right about the whole mood thingy. I'm glad that it worked out! And you're also right about the "ruin" thing, I should go in ...

Thanks for the review! Yeah, my wording sucked, I'm gonna go back and fix that. And yeah, Delly definitely should NOT lead. I am definitely not going to allow that, ...

Ok, good to know! I've already decided that for sure one of them will die, but I'm not saying who.

Thanks for the review! Yeah, people just like throwing rocks at Carter. Everyone just...has rocks... for this purpose. Hmmm yeah, reactions are important. Wait ok tell me who your favorites ...

Thanks for the review! I did go back and fix most of the things you said in my google doc (which I plan on turning into a PDF and sharing ...

Holy shoot, I did not mean to submit that twice.

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Hey there! I'm here to review your poem! First of all, I would like to say that you did really well on it! You painted an image in my mind ...

Thanks for the review!

Thank you for the review! Oh, yeah. I used to play soccer and got hit in the head with a ball, but it was during a game and the refs ...

Thanks for the help!

HOLY CRAP

Thanks for the review! AND YES, EXACTLY. The coaches are just like WALK IT OFF, even though one girl actually couldn't walk. Huh, I actually didn't think about mental injuries, ...

I thought I separated the stanzas, but now they're just all clumped together. Weird.

Thanks for the review! I'll work on making incorporating the part about the orange, and I'll also work on the thought process.