ForsakenAngel

Thank you, first of all! Second, there is a lack of explanation because that comes later. When I reveal what really happened and the things that go along with it, ...

Thank you guys! I'm working on changing some of the things you mentioned, Gryph. I agree with most of what you said, but wanted to let everyone read the original ...

Hello! Like I said in the spoiler (in case you didn't read that part) it's not supposed to make was something that came off the top of my head and ...

Nate scares me... but thanks Nate!

Ok, so I edited parts of it, like changing 'dear' to 'deer' (sorry about that one, I'm dislexic and I spell things wrong all the time). Also, Chickensandwitch, you pointed ...

Hi there, Shadow here. This is really amazing. I liked it! Though I haven't read the first part of it, I'm sure it is really great as well. ~Forsakinshadow~

Thank you. One thing though, Earendil. In poetry, there are a lot less detail that regular writing. Poetry is mostly for the mind to enterpret, which is why it lacks ...

Sorry about that, fixed it! It was a typo. ~Forsakinshadow~

Thanks guys! And in that part--"This man, name unknown to me, is not alive, Nor is he dead."-- I wasn't saying 'this man who's name is unknown to me..." I ...

Hey, Sporky :D I like this, it's pretty cool! It deserves a 'like' ^.^ ~Forsakinshadow~

Oh wow :D I love this! This is funny(:

Wow, I'm so glad you advised me to read this! It was totally beast! Lol if you need me to check out anything else, don't hesitate to ask! ~Tabitha(:

Aww thanks! Can't believe I'm on the list!! Lol ~Tabs~

Nice(: I like it!

OK, absolutly love it! This is great! If you need me to review anything, just ask, I'd be more than happy to check it out(: Good luck and keep writing. ...