ForeverYoung299

Oh good! It was not obvious until this chapter. When you started to figure out those similarities, it was kind of obvious. And waiting for the two more parts. That ...

Oh good! It was not obvious until this chapter. When you started to figure out those similarities, it was kind of obvious. And waiting for the two more parts. That ...

You are welcome! I will get to the next chapters very soon.

Those are mere mistakes and can be fixed easily. :D You can use grammarly as your grammar checker. It's not bad. And if you ever need help regarding anything, you ...

Hey! Thanks for the review and I do think that I mentioned playing Holi. And yeah, that was due to this stupid corona

Hey! Just had a question. Is this really a short story or a poem? It feels like a poem but it's written short story. So, pls clarify. Then, I will ...

Did you mention it? Maybe then I didn't notice.Obviously, it's great considering it's your first genuine attempt to writing and if itv were not your first, then too it would ...

Hey PoetryBot, Thanks a lot for the comment. Glad that u liked it :D

Hey! Thanks for the review.

Hey! Thanks for the review! Thanks for pointing out the tense inconsistency. I have changed it. Hope it looks better now. Again, thanks a lot for the review!

Hey! Thanks a lot for this review and my grammar is awful. Someday, my grammar will improve amd the day will come when I am in this World and not ...

Hey! Thanks a lot for this review and my grammar is awful. Someday, my grammar will improve amd the day will come when I am in this World and not ...

Done @littlelee

Credit goes to @the_rebel_2007

Alright. Lemme end it here only and I specified that this is the end. Again, thanks a lot for all the valuable reviews you left on my work.