ForeverYoung299

Hey Plume! Thanks for the review!!!Glad that you liked it and I will think of how to change that portion to a better one with relatively equal number of syllables. ...

I havw gotta work on the descriptions for sure. They never seem to be in place. Talking about Cehyn, she doesn't seem to be the person to feel ecstatic about ...

The pacing was a bit too rushed, I guess. I too felt that. You know where the problem is... I have little knowledge of basketball and I didn't want to ...

Oh right. Thanks for the explanation

Oh okay! I thought you meant you will post another part of the chapter. Misunderstanding. :Emojis don't work so not worth giving:

And yes, as this chapter will have another part, maybe mark it as 7.1 ?

I second you!

Oh I see. The time and transition is not very clear in the chapter. And oh I re-read that part, it says he was driving a car. I just missed ...

That was definitely stupid of me to confuse those two. Whatever, doesn't matter.

Oh I am stupid. It clearly says she is a female. Sorry for that and yes thanks for the clarification.

Oh I am stupid. It clearly says she is a female. Sorry for that and yes thanks for the clarification.

Oh I see, that is not based on Earth. Great!

Um... You can either tell a mod or just copy paste.

Hey Hikari_hatake! Though this is not my work, I just saw and wanted to tell. I think you wanted to do a review but for some reason, you forgot to ...

Oh I see. Pls tag me when you post the next chapter or I will surely forget to read it. I am reading a lot of things at the same ...