ForeverYoung299

"Elidyr carefully picked his way down the path just outside of Syna, Lady flaring her wings whenever he accidentally jostled her. He could see the gates just up ahead and ...

"My name is Harvey Alexander Middleheart, the son of Elizabeth and Grant Middleheart, and brother to Niall and Tanisha". you are introducing 5 characters in a single line...believe me , ...

i can't believe my eyes! every line is in a rhythm. i struggle to make two lines rhythm, and you made whole the script rhythmic. such a talent! it's of ...

it's so beautifully crafted. i like the way you combine mathematics and poetry. it reminds me of the time when i used to write in the free period in school ...

oh my god! so beautifully crafted and well written! this was the article i was looking for. as of me, each and every word written here is a truth. in ...

camp! what a co incidence! a few minutes ago, i too was thinking of a camp. whatever. let's come to the review. i can view how you felt in the ...

it explains your painful journey in a painful way. the challenges you faced in the journey... overall, a heart teaching, beautiful, painful poem. it made me tear up...

aah. the second stanza! i genuinely loved that one. i admire your idea of putting poetry like an experiment. it was like you are finding your mind- where your mind ...

this is a personal poem. yet, it is heart teaching. one can feel your emotions through this poem. the loss you incurred... i genuinely liked it. the way you attributed ...