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  • Poetry » Literature, Fantasy Re: The Wolf and the Dragon

    Hey TheWordsOfWolfe! Forever here for a review! The work appears to be quite old, 2 months at least. So I thought I would drop a review! This was quite a ...

    Aug 8, 2021
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Narrative Re: The Last One

    Heyyy Ignorance! Forever here for a review! First of all, congratulations for the bronze medal! You definitely deserved that for you have written such a great piece! Something that I ...

    Aug 8, 2021
  • Poetry » Literature, Romantic Re: Twisted love: One sided love

    Hey! Forever here for a short review! Well. This is gonna be a dump of everything that came to my mind while reading your poem. Sorry, if it doesn't appear ...

    Aug 8, 2021
  • Short Story » General, General Re: To Buy Bread

    Heyyy! Forever here for a review! Omg this was long but it was so good! I am glad that I read this rather than going back. It still left me ...

    Aug 8, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Flames-Chapter 1: Gone

    Heyyy! Forever here for a review! This was a wonderful start to a novel. I am quite interested to know what comes next. That was a nice little cliffhanger there. ...

    Aug 7, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Eclipse: Chapter 9

    Heyyyyy! Forever here with a review! First of all, what made you give that title? Um.. is it for the fact that they aren't on Earth anymore? I don't know ...

    Aug 7, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Eclipse: Chapter 8, Our Golden Savior

    Hey! Forever here for a review! I wonder what is the reaction time of these nightshade berries. Maybe just specify it by some means to give the readers unaware of ...

    Aug 6, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Other Re: The Old Man And The Boy 6

    Hey! Forever here with a review! First of all, your writing style and tone have done their great job in your work. Not only to the boy, but it's a ...

    Aug 5, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Eclipse: Chapter 7, Nightshade

    Heyy!! Forever here for a review!! There was nothing to do except listen to the sudden far away sounds of animals, and the strange and strong smells surrounding the area; ...

    Aug 5, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Conversations

    Heyyy!! Forever here for a short review! Wasn't this written on a real life experience? The writing actually makes me think of that because it's so relatable. Your text, though ...

    Aug 4, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Other Re: The Old Man And The Boy 5

    Heyyy! Forever Here for a short review! Isn't that a plot twist? 👀 And didn't you say that the story is not gonna have one until the end? Whatever it ...

    Aug 4, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Eclipse: Chapter 6, Campfire Stories

    Hey!!!!! Forever here for a review! This was a good short chapter with some humourous elements like the start. I guessed it right about Aden's character. It was something more ...

    Aug 4, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Eclipse: Chapter 5, Don't Think About it

    Heyyyyy!! Forever here for a review! I felt like that there are some problems with the tense in this chapter. If I am not wrong, the thoughts too should be ...

    Aug 3, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Eclipse: Chapter 4, A Single Red Rose

    Heyyyyyyyy! Forever here for a review! So, a lot of things happened in here. Literally, a lot of revelations to make the plot move forward. Now, after reading this chapter, ...

    Aug 3, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Other Re: The Old Man And The Boy 4

    Heyyy RandomTalks! Forever here with a review! Till now, of all the chapters I have read of the novel, this was the best. It had a very calming and soothing ...

    Aug 2, 2021


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