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Re: The Wolf and the Dragon
Hey TheWordsOfWolfe! Forever here for a review! The work appears to be quite old, 2 months at least. So I thought I would drop a review! This was quite a ...
Aug 8, 2021 -
Re: The Last One
Heyyy Ignorance! Forever here for a review! First of all, congratulations for the bronze medal! You definitely deserved that for you have written such a great piece! Something that I ...
Aug 8, 2021 -
Re: Twisted love: One sided love
Hey! Forever here for a short review! Well. This is gonna be a dump of everything that came to my mind while reading your poem. Sorry, if it doesn't appear ...
Aug 8, 2021 -
Re: To Buy Bread
Heyyy! Forever here for a review! Omg this was long but it was so good! I am glad that I read this rather than going back. It still left me ...
Aug 8, 2021 -
Re: Flames-Chapter 1: Gone
Heyyy! Forever here for a review! This was a wonderful start to a novel. I am quite interested to know what comes next. That was a nice little cliffhanger there. ...
Aug 7, 2021 -
Re: Eclipse: Chapter 9
Heyyyyy! Forever here with a review! First of all, what made you give that title? Um.. is it for the fact that they aren't on Earth anymore? I don't know ...
Aug 7, 2021 -
Re: Eclipse: Chapter 8, Our Golden Savior
Hey! Forever here for a review! I wonder what is the reaction time of these nightshade berries. Maybe just specify it by some means to give the readers unaware of ...
Aug 6, 2021 -
Re: The Old Man And The Boy 6
Hey! Forever here with a review! First of all, your writing style and tone have done their great job in your work. Not only to the boy, but it's a ...
Aug 5, 2021 -
Re: Eclipse: Chapter 7, Nightshade
Heyy!! Forever here for a review!! There was nothing to do except listen to the sudden far away sounds of animals, and the strange and strong smells surrounding the area; ...
Aug 5, 2021 -
Re: Conversations
Heyyy!! Forever here for a short review! Wasn't this written on a real life experience? The writing actually makes me think of that because it's so relatable. Your text, though ...
Aug 4, 2021 -
Re: The Old Man And The Boy 5
Heyyy! Forever Here for a short review! Isn't that a plot twist? 👀 And didn't you say that the story is not gonna have one until the end? Whatever it ...
Aug 4, 2021 -
Re: Eclipse: Chapter 6, Campfire Stories
Hey!!!!! Forever here for a review! This was a good short chapter with some humourous elements like the start. I guessed it right about Aden's character. It was something more ...
Aug 4, 2021 -
Re: Eclipse: Chapter 5, Don't Think About it
Heyyyyy!! Forever here for a review! I felt like that there are some problems with the tense in this chapter. If I am not wrong, the thoughts too should be ...
Aug 3, 2021 -
Re: Eclipse: Chapter 4, A Single Red Rose
Heyyyyyyyy! Forever here for a review! So, a lot of things happened in here. Literally, a lot of revelations to make the plot move forward. Now, after reading this chapter, ...
Aug 3, 2021 -
Re: The Old Man And The Boy 4
Heyyy RandomTalks! Forever here with a review! Till now, of all the chapters I have read of the novel, this was the best. It had a very calming and soothing ...
Aug 2, 2021
