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Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 4.4
Hey!! Forever here with a review!! Daisy closed her eyes and looked away as an small shockwave followed by an intense heat spread through the area. Hm... Daisy was definitely ...
Sep 7, 2021 -
Re: The Paper Boat
Hey! Forever here with a review!! Characters: I have read some of your stories and most of them seem to have siblings, may it be brother and sister, brother and ...
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Re: The Waiting Room
Hey RandomTalks!! Forever here with a review! Characters: The main character is the doctor. She is a "human being". There are a thousand people out there to say doctors don't ...
Sep 7, 2021 -
Re: LoaMR: Ch. I: Unforgotten Murder 3 (Reworked)
Hey Mailice! Forever here with a review! So here we get quite an explicit view of Leonard's character; the information we got in the previous chapters was not explicit and ...
Sep 7, 2021 -
Re: LoaMR: Ch. I: Unforgotten Murder 2 (Reworked)
Hey! Forever here with a review! This was a wonderful part. So, Leonard is actually this de Waarfay's grandson. This is what I can understand after reading this part. However, ...
Sep 7, 2021 -
Re: Fool Without A Master (Chapter 1 Part 2)
Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was quite an intriguing part of the chapter. I really like the way how you are describing the past. Past is always important ...
Sep 7, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 4.3
Hey Harry! Forever here with a review! Harry, you are a genius!(I mean the book character is). He actually doesn't have any flaws, I mean except minute ones which doesn't ...
Sep 6, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 4.2
Hey! Forever here with a review and wow, I have reached it at last. That 62%!! That was insanely funny, to be very honest. I love that exact percentage. Now ...
Sep 6, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 4.1
Hey! Forever here with a review! OH. MY. GOD. I just want to know the purpose of those dots. I haven't seen people writing Oh my god as that. Even ...
Sep 6, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 3.6
Hey! Forever here with a review: The three of them made their way towards Mrs. Kane's room. It was a little bigger than what the two of them head, but ...
Sep 6, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 3.5
Hey Harry! Forever here with a review!! So, they are quite important faces in the movement. It's still a mystery about what that is so. I have a question: Will ...
Sep 6, 2021 -
Re: Teachers' Day
Heyy!! Forever here with a review!! Wow. First of all this was quite good. I really like how this was so simple and yet so powerful in its core. I ...
Sep 5, 2021 -
Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 3.4
Hey!! Forever here with a review!! For some reason, it seems like Harry and Aria are quite important people in the meeting. I don't know if it's only due to ...
Sep 5, 2021 -
Re: Eclipse: Chapter 15
Hey! Forever here with a review!! First of all with your question. I think young adult is better than new adult. And I just wanna ask how many chapters are ...
Sep 5, 2021 -
Re: Bubbles is Missing (Horror Story)
Heyyy!! Forever here with a short review!!! This was quite a good story. First of all I thought the creature that was stealing the pets must be an old animal ...
Sep 5, 2021